Not Love at First Sight – Six Sentence Sunday 04/15/2012

Another snap of Vancouver, where the story begins.

This is my fourth 6 sentence snippet from Book 1 in my Nederlander Series. The hero and heroine finally meet .

“I didn’t need saving.” She brushed the dirt off her Nike running shorts, as if it would restore her dignity.

He shrugged, and raised a brow, “Next time I’ll leave you to the bad guys. Hey, I’ll feed you to them.”

She stared at him hard. “So you’re, a good guy?”

He scratched his chin. “Yeah,” he said with reluctance.”

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Author: Jo-Ann Carson

Jo-Ann Carson writes a saucy mix of fantasy, adventure and romance. Her latest stories are in the Gambling Ghosts Series: A Highland Ghost for Christmas, A Viking Ghost for Valentine’s Day, Confessions of a Pirate Ghost and The Biker Ghost Meets his Match. An anthology of the novellas will be coming out this summer. Currently she is working on Midnight Magic, A Ghost & Abby Mystery, the first book in a spin-off series from her Viking ghost story. Jo-Ann loves watching sunrises, playing Mah Jong and drinking good coffee. You can chat with her on social media: You can find all her links on her website - http://jo-anncarson.com

18 thoughts on “Not Love at First Sight – Six Sentence Sunday 04/15/2012”

  1. Oooh, Jo-Ann! Nice interplay between them and I love the hints at his backstory. And hers, for that matter. I also like this sentence: “She brushed the dirt off her Nike running shorts, as if it would restore her dignity.” Says a lot!

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