Another snap of Vancouver, where the story begins.
This is my fourth 6 sentence snippet from Book 1 in my Nederlander Series. The hero and heroine finally meet .
“I didn’t need saving.” She brushed the dirt off her Nike running shorts, as if it would restore her dignity.
He shrugged, and raised a brow, “Next time I’ll leave you to the bad guys. Hey, I’ll feed you to them.”
She stared at him hard. “So you’re, a good guy?”
He scratched his chin. “Yeah,” he said with reluctance.”
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Love it!
Tks Carmen
Nice interaction between them!
I love chemistry:)
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Jo-Ann
Love that last exchange. Excellent chemistry here!
Great six, Jo-Ann!
Ooh, why the reluctance? Does he not want to be one of the good guys?
Emma
Some men don’t like to admit it. He’s one of them.
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Jo-Ann
If he has to think about it, that says he has an interesting backstory – I like him! Can’t wait to read more, terrific six!
Veronica
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Jo-Ann
Haha he doesn’t sound so certain of his “good guy” status himself. Nice six!
Tonya
Are any of us?
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Jo-Ann
Nice dialogue between them! I’m intrigued by his reluctance – sounds like he has some interesting internal conflicts.
Lorraine
Thanks for coming by and commenting. That’s exactly what I was trying to get across.
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Jo-Ann
I like the humour in this and look forward to more. Thanks for the comment on mine
Thanks Sue. Enjoy your Sunday evening.
Oooh, Jo-Ann! Nice interplay between them and I love the hints at his backstory. And hers, for that matter. I also like this sentence: “She brushed the dirt off her Nike running shorts, as if it would restore her dignity.” Says a lot!
Silver
Thank you for coming by and commenting. You pick up a lot!
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Jo-Ann